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    Tiwa Adeleke is a strong fierce woman who is ready to do anything to remain rich, her business is her priority and she’s ready to kill if it’s what she has to do… journey with me in this interesting story, trust me you’ll never regret it.

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    THE COMMISSIONER’S WIFE 🔥
    💥EPISODE 1
    STORIES XTRA

    LOCATION>>> Uncompleted building.
    Scene 1
    James is seen tied on a chair…looking weak and miserable…with blood all over his face.
    Tony: where is the gold?
    James: I won’t tell you… why should I?… I was the one that found the gold, your greedy aunty sent you right?.
    Tony: don’t you dare insult her…she’s your boss.
    James: not anymore…you think holding me captive and beating me up will make ME (pauses and smirks)… tell you where the gold is.
    (Tiwa enters the building)
    Tiwa: he refused to talk right?
    Tony: yes aunty…he is being stubborn.
    Tiwa: leave him to me I’ll handle him my way.
    (Tiwa faces James)
    Tiwa: I don’t know why the poor are always naïve and desperate also greedy as well…even at the point of death.
    James: Tiwa Adeleke, I was right about you sending your puppet.
    (Tony gives him a resetting punch on his face, for calling him a puppet)
    Tiwa: you’re becoming too wild because you found gold…I can vividly remember the day you came crying in my office asking for a job. Look at you behaving as if you have achieved a lot in life.
    James: that was when I thought you were a good person not knowing that you’re a wolf in sheep clothing.
    Tiwa: it seems like you don’t love your life anymore, let me help you waste it.( Tiwa brings out a gun from her bag)
    Tiwa: do you know what this is?… mind you, it’s not a toy.
    James: do you think you can scare me with that.
    Tiwa: Oh I see…
    (Tiwa shoots one of his legs)
    Tiwa: you see, well loaded…so you were saying?…are ready to talk or should I go ahead and end you.
    James: ah ah (he screams in pain) the gold is my.. my…house…under the bed.
    Tiwa: interesting…Tony, go and confirm.
    Tiwaa: okay.

    SCENE TWO…
    LOCATION>>> At the Adeleke mansion…
    Mr. Johnson: have any one of you reached to your mother…I have been calling her but not reachable…I don’t know what’s keeping her in the office.
    Tari: I also tried reaching her but not reachable.
    Mr. Johnson: but she hasn’t been this late before.
    Priscy: Dad relax, maybe she’s busy with work or something.

    SCENE THREE…
    LOCATION>>> The uncompleted building
    Few hours later…
    Tony comes back with the Gold…
    Tony: Aunty I found it.
    Tiwa: interesting.
    (Tiwa takes the Gold from him)
    James: You got the gold now let me go.
    Tiwa: and what made you think that I’ll let you go…Never…for the stress you made me go through today, you have to die.
    (Tiwa shoots the gun at James forehead)
    Tony: aunty, you killed him.
    Tiwa: yes, discard the body.

    SCENE FOUR…
    LOCATION>>> At the Adeleke mansion
    Mr. Johnson: This is almost 10pm and your mother is not yet back.
    Tari: yes, I think we should be worried.
    Priscy: What if something is wrong, Dad I think you should call your search team to look for her.
    Mr. Johnson: No I will do that myself.
    (They hears Tiwa’s car horn)
    Tari: I think she’s back.
    (They went outside)
    Tiwa comes down from the car.
    Mr. Johnson: What kept you so long at the office, kelo shele{what happened}
    Tiwa: Sorry, I was busy with work and I went for a meeting conference it and took us so long.
    Mr. Johnson: And you line was not going.
    Tiwa: I was not in the possession for any calls so I turned off my phone….
    Mr. Johnson: Is just that we were worried about you and it was unlike you.
    Tiwa: Nothing to worry about, I’m here now.
    (Tiwa was about to go inside)
    Mr. Johnson: Wait!
    (Tiwa turns back)
    Tiwa: What’s wrong?
    Mr. Tony: why is your cloth stained with blood splash?

    TO BE CONTINUED…

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